‘love Killed Me’ Poem by Bilal Raja

‘love Killed Me’

Rating: 4.6


The rain disguises the tears
The smile hides the fears
The age surprises the years
I’m here to make things clear
The pain overcomes the face
The love becomes the hate
Potential turns to waste
Destiny burns to fate

No more laughter
No life after
The final chapter
The deciding factor
All the faces have left
Everything sacred I felt
Kept me taking my breath
But now I’m waiting on death

The love is concealed
The world is unreal
Hurt is how I feel
Dirt is now my meal
The naivety of youth
Searching for truth
Loyalty is proof
I’m talking to you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kjxnhvkzdh Vnhcjfh 21 January 2009

wow it is nice! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 21 January 2009

i loved this poem! ! ! ! u r an excellent writer! ! ! plzz keep em coming! ! !

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Ron Knight 21 January 2009

Nice poem well written

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John Tiong Chunghoo 22 January 2009

Dirt is now my meal The naivety of youth Searching for truth Loyalty is proof I’m talking to you! dear bilal, you have the things to be a great poet. i love the last four lines the most because they have zest. but i dont understand the first line - dirt is my meal. may be i just dont like the word dirt. the last four lines are great material. keep on and read all the great poets and you will find yourself improving day by day. tks. john

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Tabitha Castillo 22 January 2009

What an wonderful write! Thank you very much for sharing! I am adding it to my favorites!

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Surya . 07 June 2009

very meaningfull poem. i love this para more 'The love is concealed The world is unreal Hurt is how I feel Dirt is now my meal The naivety of youth Searching for truth Loyalty is proof I’m talking to you! ' posted 10 surya

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Yassar Ali 13 April 2009

great poem keep up the good work

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Greenwolfe 1962 08 February 2009

The design of the write here is quite interesting. It has a certain appeal because it has a nice reading flow. I'm not sure, but that may be the source of its charm. Otherwise. It is a quite ordinary poem. Full credit for construction of this poem. GW62

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Jordi Petersen 03 February 2009

Wow I really enjoyed reading this poem. It sounds like a poem I would write. Great job Bilal Raja.

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Tiera Parker 30 January 2009

wow your a really awesome poet!

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