A Truth Poem by Egal Bohen

A Truth

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The Universe is God
You did not know?
They do not tell

The Universe is God
All within it too
Including You

Including You
The Universe is God
To God we are as senses are to us

Yet we don't see
See that we are part of he
Or she

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gillian.E. Shaw 20 August 2005

Hey! loved it! Made me smile! Harmonious.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 28 September 2005

well done! love this.

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David Gerardino 05 October 2005

NICE POEM, like the idea......................

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Aashish Ameya 08 February 2006

nice one, just like indian philosophy...

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Brian Dorn 16 April 2006

A very wise poem that should be read over and over again! Brian

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 October 2009

The Universe is God All within it too Including You.........God in us andpresent everywhere.Thy presence isfelt even in smallest particles and here lies the essence of message. almost allthe epics say and reveal about it...well dome and it is beautifullu presented here.....10 read mine go back....i m disgrace...humble submission

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Vaibhav Shah 02 May 2008

Bhgwat Gita says that we are soul and god is supersoul.We are only a part of this supersoul.After our death we become one with this supersoul.The union of soul with supersoul is called salvation.You have conveyed this message very beatifully.Very good philosophical poem

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Blue angel Florida 05 March 2008

The Truth, The cycle of Life, The Universe, Balance...Love..Lovely!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

god is everywhere, even after our death.

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Ben Gieske 30 December 2007

Good choice of form and use of repetition. The question is effective. You have a unique voice and know how to deliver a message.

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