A Tranquil Water Wheel Poem by Marilyn Lott

A Tranquil Water Wheel

Rating: 5.0


The beauty of a water wheel
Amongst lilies in a pond
How sweet and how tranquil with
Green trees and meadow beyond

Fragrant and colorful spring flowers
So exciting they are to see
How welcome after frosty winter
The park is beckoning to me

Soft gentle statues adorn
The park for all who visit
Rockery adds to the rustic look
Oh, how truly exquisite

I enjoy spending many hours
With a relaxing and refreshing feel
That is captured so perfectly with
A tranquil water wheel!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 07 June 2009

Lovely imageries Marilyn...the opening stanza was the most i liked...perfect in rhythm and in its construction...thanks...10

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Thad Wilk 23 March 2009

Hi Marilyn! ! A lovely poem and the imagery you have presented of this park is so fine! The finishing touch is this water wheel; it makes this picture divine! ! Way to go! *10*! Friend Thad

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Susan Bagley 20 March 2009

Wish I was there with you Marilyn, this is lovely, As always. Susan

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Marilyn Lott

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Washington state USA
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