A Storm Approaches Poem by Sana Olivia Hernandez

A Storm Approaches

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On a hot summer day,
The weather helped me out.
A storm made the sun go away,
The rain ended this drought.

I wiped off my sweat,
To meet the storm I raced.
We embraced,
And I danced in its rain.

A storm approaches,
And I am grateful.

-SOH

Thursday, September 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: writing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I (still) love the rain.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 14 September 2014

A nice poem about the coming of heavy rain, a nature's way of ending a drought. Lovely. Always, I enjoy good poems about nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Daniel Brick 10 September 2014

TO MEET THE STORM I RACED./WE EMBRACED, /AND I DANCED IN ITS RAIN. This is so - ecstatic. Most people run and hide their heads when it rains, but YOU actively sought out the rain. Impatient for the experience, you couldn't wait for it to find you, you had to find it. There's an element of danger in this poem, as I'm sure your'e aware. For example, a lightning strike. But that danger just makes the embrace of the rain more exciting. And excitement is what your poem achieves!

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