A Special Gift Poem by Emma Adamyan
A Special Gift
Since you`ve been loving me
I was given a special gift,
It still sounds so unusual...
Was it your favour to me
Or maybe the Lord decided I should hold it...
For it showed where I was wrong and right,
It revealed your secrets, so I could treat you right,
It warmed me in days of cold,
Decorated like only could gold,
Full of enthusiasm
It made a unique rhythm,
Its only existence gave a birth for my hopes,
Sometimes it went rapid, sometimes shady,
Sorry I hardly knew how to make it steady,
All I could is feeling it deep inside your chest,
That`s how it became mine,
For me to keep it like a shrine,
It is native, restless and smart-
The broken beating of your heart!
thoughtful and beautiful! the way you thought out, really amazing! 10+
Nice so gently poem like a heart of woman....I´m wonder if you write your poems in Russian language...Thank you for sharing :)
fine poem.. thank you for visiting me. :) .
The Russian writer's flavour for details.................well written.10
The broken beating of your heart has provoked though restlessly. But gift of love has motivated mind with greatness. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10
This is beautifully expressive with powerful emotion and intimacy. Love it.
yes dear Nivedita, a beating of my beloved`s heart was that special gift of mine. imagine, u have ur heart, but its beating depends on another`s feelings. joy or sadness all is shared between both. that was the point of my poem. thx for ur mark!
Cascade poetry…culminated in …’ The broken beating of your heart! ’ …was it the gift? or you felt it? Melancholy but luxury of readers and poets too…finish is anticlimax Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Truly from the Heart. Enjoyed the read. Well done!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Beautiful. Thank you dear poet for emparting your heart.