A Slow Sweet Beat Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Slow Sweet Beat

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If fast it's violent and makes us wild,
We start dancing like a naked beast,
For the nectar of love it acts like yeast,
I dislike fermentation of a juice so neat.

If slow it's ardent, cute and mild,
We start dreaming of a fairy in dance,
And love is blended with rimes of romance,
I like this blending like a flower's sweat.

Fast music is a noise so badly shrilled,
Slow music brings peace to the restless mind,
A peaceful mind is never unkind,
Sing and dance on a slow sweet beat.

Sunday, October 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: music
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Slow music is sweet and brings peace to the minds.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 13 October 2014

Slow music is always lovely and nice.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 October 2014

In other way I can say that the work done sincerely will effective and efficient..loved by many or less speak more clarity, Slow wins the race...A simple poem with multi meaning...soothing to mind....thanks

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 October 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said, Slow music is sweet and cool to listen. Loved reading it.

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Hazel Durham 13 October 2014

Serenity is a state of mind that slow music can deliver us into a beautiful, tranquil and loving mind! Lovely write! Thank you for your comments on my poems!

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Salini Nair 13 October 2014

Fast music is a noise so badly shrilled, Slow music brings peace to the mind, A peaceful mind is never unkind, Sing and dance on a slow sweet beat....................i agree to this some way...................nice

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Valsa George 13 October 2014

What you have said here is cent percent true. Fast beats drive us to a kind of frenzy or madness! Slow music is so calming and pleasant! Beautifully put!

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