A Single Red Rose Poem by kerry green

A Single Red Rose

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A SINGLE RED ROSE
A single red rose is all I hold of beloved whose time on earth is done. A single red rose if I could could go back in time where my beloved in my hand placed a single red rose. If I could I would go back to that moment in time not with time exchanged as he handed me the rose and on my lips he placed a Kiss. I so crave to look upon that face with his eyes sparkling blue. A single rose a single kiss is all I hold of my dear beloved. A single rose a single kiss my dearest beloved forever missed. I will never forget that rose or the kiss once placed upon my lips.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

really great poem! ! ! i'm so sorry about your dearly beloved as the poem says, great wright! ! ! love it so much

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I think ur poem is sweet im sorry for ur lost...but it was very heart felt....keep wrighting.

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nice poem dear lady............

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Melissa Wagner 09 June 2009

Good poem, but try writing in stanza form.

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

very beautiful and endearing piece. I couldn't go to your site, the link itsn't working.

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It's so beautiful! You're so expressive. And this piece is wondeful!

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Angelic Warrior 07 July 2009

goes right down to the soul......truly heartfelt.....a wonderful piece.......so very sad......keep your rose :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 July 2009

wow! so beautiful! 10+

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~ Jon London ~ 14 June 2009

Everything is there, the feeling the right choice of words within the lines...but I also agree..If your lines were broken down...this piece would have a greater impact on the reader...but if you've written it this way purposely...then...a wonderful poem never the less.......keep exploring my friend...you have soul

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Lynda Robson 10 June 2009

The content is good, I agree with Word Slave it would be better written as a poem in stanzas, keep writing, 10 Lynda xx

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