A Secret Poem by Asif Andalib

A Secret



I want to tell a secret my dear
I want to whisper it in your ear

I have kept it in my mind for a long time
To tell it to someone special in a rhyme

I wanted to tell but I felt shy
I was afraid you might make me cry

Everyone says it in their own way
Now it's my turn to say it today

Come closer to listen to my words
Promise you won't be scared like wild birds

I love you more than anything else
Without you my life will be like hells

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 26 October 2012

A wonderful flowing poem. Like it.

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Sallam Yassin 26 October 2012

that secret of love make u sometime cry make u sometime fly/ well done

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Onyeme John 26 October 2012

Nice poem! Well constructed in rhymes

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Hazel Durham 26 October 2012

A beautiful poem with great rhythm and flow, just perfect!

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Mark Dillon 26 October 2012

A great few personal lines to leave with a bunch of her fav flowers.

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Poetheart Morgan 26 October 2012

I love this direct way and simple to talk about love. You said all that she needs hear and now wait for your love! ! ! Don't be shame and go on! ! ! ! Beautiful very very beautifull

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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