Dave Alan Walker

Bronze Star - 2,520 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

A Seamless Life Line


A never ending story
of events
That fall into line
like soldiers on parade

From one event to the next
It's like it was a plan
just to get you to now

From the obscure
to the sublime
everything in life
falls into one
seamless life line

Submitted: Tuesday, February 14, 2012

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  • Gold Star - 13,842 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/10/2013 3:37:00 PM)

    So much truth in so little words. Really like this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/31/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Lovely poem..Good message...Great write.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,718 Points Babatunde Aremu (4/11/2012 3:18:00 PM)

    Great poem with great moral lesson about life (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (2/22/2012 3:41:00 PM)

    words fall into line as you write from your soul..blessings (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,112 Points Diane Hine (2/22/2012 10:36:00 AM)

    Thought-provoking poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Cristina Teodor (2/18/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    Path of life, a line that never ends, events that succeed following a pattern, penned so lovely by you..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,808 Points Smoky Hoss (2/17/2012 6:55:00 PM)

    Another very good one Dave; great pondering upon life's tracks...and destination. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,060 Points Unwritten Soul (2/17/2012 8:32:00 AM)

    Sometimes i wonder if you are a patriot, coz when you write, make all heart out...
    I agree many of them finished the life lines with a dot. end of a story end of a life line...but it never stop to have another dot like this................... how many dots will they have for their life? when love is not linked to our hearts and war/hate is connected to our souls it seems like a life line will contiguously to be done...what a sad one_Unwritten SOul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Renu Kakkar (2/17/2012 3:45:00 AM)

    very true...life is events one following another (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Carse (2/16/2012 11:34:00 AM)

    How did we get to 'now'. Sometimes it feels impossible that life has passed us by so effortlessly. Well written and illuminating. Thank you for your kind comment on one of my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,846 Points john tiong chunghoo (2/15/2012 5:48:00 PM)

    love poem, i like this, like it is planned. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Herojit Philem (2/15/2012 12:22:00 PM)

    Yes, it's true......... Nice poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 516 Points Juan Olivarez (2/15/2012 8:47:00 AM)

    Absolutely true, great words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Nihil Existentia (2/14/2012 4:37:00 PM)

    Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Cockrell (2/14/2012 7:56:00 AM)

    destiny, or fate... the path we follow! great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,076 Points Valerie Dohren (2/14/2012 5:35:00 AM)

    Great little verse, and so true. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (2/14/2012 4:33:00 AM)

    Mmmh! you could never be more correct than this beautiful poem....

    A never ending story
    Of events.
    That fall into line
    like soldiers on a parade.....

    Salute to you there big brother. (Report) Reply

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