A Sad Tale Poem by Meggie Gultiano

A Sad Tale



I saw him last drinking native wine
In a wooden cart he called his home
A far cry from a lovely house he called his own

Ahh, life had brought his misery
Eyes for him were one's of envy
His family adored him immensely

But now all is gone, his family, his friends
No one wanted to be in his company
In pain, his drinking came to an end

I stood there, by that lonely road again
Hoping to see him to ease his pain
Weeping in silence...i know he died in vain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 28 July 2009

your beautiful poem brings out the bitter side of the life very touchingly, Meggie... thanks...10

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Mary Joy Lumanog 28 July 2009

Sad tale reminded me of my grandfather...he died in vain too...with all his family in feud..he also drinks tuba! everytime...but maybe there's always a reason why those comes our life... sympathy can give ease pain...i know that in time despite the upbringing sadness of our lives can give joy to those who have been left behind...but in the future..that there is still life.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 29 July 2009

We have but one life and it's a precious gift, some hate the life they are given and drink to forget their problems leaving many a broken home in their wake, save your pitty for those that have the stength to find their way again.. Andy 10

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Alison Cassidy 01 August 2009

This is beautifully expressed, Meggie. Your phrasing is particularly fine and the story - you give the reader just enough to create his/her own version. Sad, the alcoholic's downward slide into misery. Even death is not a release. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ken E Hall 01 August 2009

A sad tale indeed told so eloquently with so many subjects to see Soft and sadly expressed+++++++++10 regards and thanks

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masked lady 13 December 2009

Meggie, its a very sad tale, really. Its so sad that one dies alone, (am i taking these lines too literal?) But now all is gone, his family, his friends No one wanted to be in his company In pain, his drinking came to an end Your poem touches the heart of the reader. More power Meggie!

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Sonya Florentino 04 October 2009

a very sad tale indeed... we cannot take anything for granted... when all is said and done, the love of family and friends is all that matters....

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Ben Gieske 26 September 2009

A sad tale indeed. This line, I stood there, by that lonely road again stands out and lingers in my mind. Loneliness pervades the whole scene and story.

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Patrick A. Martin 15 September 2009

There, but for the grace of God, go I. Thank you fot a lovely hartfelt poem. 10

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Christopher Hunter 15 September 2009

wow. Thanks for the heads-up on this poem. This is a great work. It is such a touching and deeply moving work. Wonderful. Simply wonderful.

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