ramesh rai

Gold Star - 18,455 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

A Rainy Day - Poem by ramesh rai

To-day it is raining without any break
as if flood has come in sky
so overthrowing all water
breaking its dam

A rainy day is a day
of full relax and enjoyment
with deliciousness of self cooked dishes
and a cup of coffee or tea

The young couple may be enjoying
the thundering cloud
palpitation of heart must be increasing
intending to quench thirst of life
so, the cloud is getting dark
to view the wanton look of couple

Children are enjoying the rainy day
as they are free from study
making paper boat to sail down the lane

Baby child is also trying
to catch the rain drop
spreading his little palm out of window

The old couple is also sitting in the courtyard
remembering those days when they enjoyed
the rainy day under one umbrella
half they drenched, half they embraced

A rainy is the day
of full rest and enjoyment

Begone! all anxieties of life and
let me enjoy the rainy day of my life.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

The last stanza, i mean to say during bad days if you avoid unnecessary anxieties then that can also be enjoyed.

Comments about A Rainy Day by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 38,318 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/20/2014 8:10:00 AM)

    Begone! all anxieties of life and
    let me enjoy the rainy day of my life.
    A rainy day idiomatically is used for days which are not very good but the poet bravely enjoys it. That, s great. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,526 Points Amitava Sur (6/30/2014 10:28:00 PM)

    A lovely expression of a rainy day with cheers and delight (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 95 Points Masereka Amos (7/23/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    I really need a rainy day in my life, thax Ramesh (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Sj Holland (7/20/2013 6:17:00 PM)

    I laughed when I read this. I could see all of the scenes that you described. It is a delightful poem. I especially like this:
    ...The old couple is also sitting in the courtyard
    remembering those days when they enjoyed
    the rainy day under one umbrella
    half they drenched, half they embraced...

    Thanks for reading Morning Coffee. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points John Brown (10/5/2012 8:28:00 AM)

    A very nice poem ramesh. I don't mind rainy days, as long as the day is not cold. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (8/23/2012 8:10:00 AM)

    A rainy is the day
    of full rest and enjoyment
    Begone! all anxieties of life and
    let me enjoy the rainy day of my life.
    - lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,447 Points Ken E Hall (8/18/2012 4:20:00 AM)

    A Perfect poem on the subject of rain and how we all cope with it original look how we all cope, it reminds me of Gene Kelly singing in the rain...luvli to read...regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,860 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/15/2012 8:42:00 PM)

    Regarding the last stanza, I agree with your opinion, but the anxieties are the nuisance and how to get rid of it, particularly during the rainy days of life! I have seen many people who have prepared for the rainy days, manage to sustain those hard days.. Good advice, Brother RR.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Andrew Blakemore (8/15/2012 11:11:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem which brightened my day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,860 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/15/2012 9:43:00 AM)

    In tropical region, it rains almost everyday. so we have to keep the umbrellas ready, otherwise we will be wet. Indian rainy days are completely different, it rains cats and dogs for many days and we used to get holidays if the town is flooded. Thank you Brother RR for sharing this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, August 13, 2012


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