ramesh rai

Gold Star - 18,253 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

A Search - Poem by ramesh rai

The stars are sailing their ship
in the galaxy of open universal route
up above the sky
with a twinkling search light
from one corner to another
throughout night
have they forgotten their path
or some dearest is missing
and they peep below the sky
when the entire lives is sleeping
in the lap of mother earth
in a sweet dream
of fine tomorrow
but their search is not finished
the caretaker of earth has now come
with a blazing face
burning all the devil’s mount
all the stars have switched off
their search light
and vanished
waiting for setting down the sun.


Comments about A Search by ramesh rai

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (10/20/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 613 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (9/26/2013 6:06:00 AM)

    A fine poem with good thread of thought. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (8/18/2013 1:04:00 PM)

    excellent write good images enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/17/2013 7:21:00 AM)

    Inspiring poem..Loved reading each lines and even the flow is very beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,450 Points Adeline Foster (8/2/2013 3:57:00 PM)

    Very good and with some exceptional metaphors. It is true: it lingers in one's mind. Read mine - Wide Open Spaces.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Linda L. Franklin (11/24/2011 7:10:00 AM)

    I have run some of your poetry, very good. Keep up the wonderful work you are doing, Poetry comes from the heart and that is a great thing. Good luck with your poetry.
    Sincerely,
    Linda Franklin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie hdhd dudjf (11/11/2011 3:51:00 AM)

    very inspiring..the poem leaves its taste lingering in the reader's mind for a long time.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 29, 2011



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