A Search Poem by ramesh rai

A Search

Rating: 4.5


The stars are sailing their ship
in the galaxy of open universal route
up above the sky
with a twinkling search light
from one corner to another
throughout night
have they forgotten their path
or some dearest is missing
and they peep below the sky
when the entire lives is sleeping
in the lap of mother earth
in a sweet dream
of fine tomorrow
but their search is not finished
the caretaker of earth has now come
with a blazing face
burning all the devil’s mount
all the stars have switched off
their search light
and vanished
waiting for setting down the sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
hdhd dudjf 11 November 2011

very inspiring..the poem leaves its taste lingering in the reader's mind for a long time..

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Linda L. Franklin 24 November 2011

I have run some of your poetry, very good. Keep up the wonderful work you are doing, Poetry comes from the heart and that is a great thing. Good luck with your poetry. Sincerely, Linda Franklin

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Ravi Sathasivam 20 October 2013

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 26 September 2013

A fine poem with good thread of thought.

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Heather Wilkins 18 August 2013

excellent write good images enjoyed the read

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 August 2013

Inspiring poem..Loved reading each lines and even the flow is very beautiful.

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Adeline Foster 02 August 2013

Very good and with some exceptional metaphors. It is true: it lingers in one's mind. Read mine - Wide Open Spaces. Adeline

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