A poem assemble ideas,
Concentrates experience
Await its time, place
For its own release
A Poem is a cluster bomb
A Poem explodes
Particle by particle
Projectile by projectile
Piece by piece,
Varying impact on the way
A poem is a cluster bomb
Out of a poem come wails
Out of a poem come hails
Out of a poem comes repair
Out of a poem comes despair
A Poem is a cluster bomb
It spreads in ripples
It travels like a storm
It is fashioned in riddles
It can pour painful scorn
A poem is a cluster bomb!
Friday,17th July,2009
Liverpool, UK
penned the truth beautifully! poems has a power which can give poemotheraphy! 10+
lovely conception of poem as a cluster bomb good write -10 anjali
An interesting train of thought...thought provoking which is what a poem should be........ Ruth
there can be a lot of potential in a poem...a good reader gets most of it...written very well....10
From: TaMaRa HaNaRiNg...dancing with the wind..lat To: Isaac Maliya Date-Time: 8/3/2009 5: 02: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: a poem is a cluster bomb.. ---------- hi friend..sorry unable to comment on any poem as some problem iam facing since two days..enjoyed your poem.. it has a new concept about the poem with a beautifuul describtion of the poet's pregnacy, the poem delivery and kind of it's new born..loved it
Yeah.. a good poem fuses slowly to explode into vibrant colors..beautifuly written
i liked so much the third stanza...but the whole poem is great....well done Isaac
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very well expressed Isaac...a poem has many forms..and can explode with emotions that many have never felt before.....well penned 10++