Zinnia Narcissa

A Place In You - Poem by Zinnia Narcissa

How can I have a place within you?
I honestly care about your tender ways
Thinking your protection every moment
Loving every details of your life

Understand whatever your past
Forgetting what lies around and behind you
I don’t mind what others ‘r saying
Just give me a little room upon you

Waiting cannot last any longer
Because I will die early longing with you
Shortness of life is everlasting to me
If I had space in the kingdom of your heart

Where will I stay in the rest of my days?
To whom will I give my everlasting commitment?
If your heart is open only for a dot-sized
Will let me pass through a Place within
and open widely to flow like a stream of Love inside you?

Comments about A Place In You by Zinnia Narcissa

  • Rookie - 56 Points Ninette Carey (5/23/2015 12:34:00 PM)

    Beautful spoken! ! A gift of Love to be truly cherished! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,173 Points Hazel Durham (5/19/2015 8:11:00 AM)

    Beautifully written expressing great passion and truth pouring from your besotted heart! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 277 Points Nancy Oyula (1/16/2015 12:30:00 AM)

    Very well written. I love: -) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,242 Points Points Of View (9/4/2014 3:20:00 AM)

    nice one...
    treasure every moment..
    for we are just a passers by.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 108 Points Sonali Ganguly (5/16/2014 10:05:00 PM)

    beautifully expressed..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amymalia Houston (5/6/2014 8:48:00 PM)

    Wonderful creation and masterpiece. Burning and passionate love (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Helena Zen (5/6/2014 9:53:00 AM)

    Two thumbs up on this poem. Great (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 73 Points Maria Luzong (5/4/2014 8:18:00 PM)

    Understand whatever your past
    Forgetting what lies around and behind you
    I don’t mind what others ‘r saying
    Just give me a little room upon you

    Each line is so Lovely powerful and very nice and beautiful. Hands up. Thumbs UP. Well Done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marjonie Clares (5/4/2014 7:41:00 PM)

    ...it will start in small size then the love will overflow. BRILLIANT poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venus Lim (5/4/2014 7:00:00 AM)

    How elusive to pass inside your heart to get the love of the dearest one
    APPLAUSE on this poem
    Thumbs up to the poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mae Navales (5/4/2014 6:06:00 AM)

    I feel an honest commitment and faithful love to the beloved. So beautiful and lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vilma Gomez (5/4/2014 3:38:00 AM)

    BRILLIANT! ! ! I love the climax at the last stanza (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jonas Goncalves (5/3/2014 1:30:00 PM)

    Brilliant poem! The eleventh verse invaded my mind... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Tina Chan (5/1/2014 9:25:00 PM)

    Like the topic of love. There's always a place for love in one's heart. If not then make room! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Susan Wall (5/1/2014 4:23:00 PM)

    very nice well said and very loving, keep up the good poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Susan Wall (5/1/2014 9:28:00 AM)

    Very sweet, i enjoyed keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jose Santos (5/1/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    If your heart is open only for a dot-sized. Your words and lines are so deep. Well crafted (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (4/29/2014 4:39:00 PM)

    This is just beautiful beyound words..had me in tears as I read this...thank you for sharing this....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 201 Points Bernadette Fernandez (4/29/2014 12:50:00 PM)

    So highly wonderful. This is my favorite. What a lovely poem. SUPERB (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ryan Orleans (4/29/2014 8:51:00 AM)

    I like it. It's powerful and gentle at the same time. As how love should be. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 20, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, April 21, 2014

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