Sayli Satam

A Place I Wish - Poem by Sayli Satam

Lying on the bed with imagination ruling my mind,
I wonder if there exist a place where happiness I can find.

A place far away from this selfish land where I can be me,
A place where there are no restrictions and I can fly free.

A place which lack emotions, feelings and pain,
A place where there is God to walk along with me on every lane.

A place where wonders and magic exist,
So that I can forget the things I want to, so that I can get out of this pain and suffering too.

A place where money doesn't rule,
A place where no one can be made fool.

A place where exist loyalty,
A place where love is free of durability

A place where only our loved ones exist, with whom I can spend infinite time,
Where I can spread happiness around and like a bright star I shine.

A place where I can meet God whenever I’m low,
And question him why the things happened so.

Why you sent such person in my life who are not meant to be,
Why have you sent me in this world where I can’t be me.

Millions of questions I need to ask to Lord for this suffering,
Where is the place you exist lying on the bed I keep wondering…

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about A Place I Wish by Sayli Satam

  • Freshman - 824 Points V P Mahur (3/2/2014 11:09:00 AM)

    Dear Sayli
    Your Imagery is real wonderful
    I love reading this poem
    Thanks for nice read
    keep it up
    I invite you to read my poems and put comments (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,417 Points Saadat Tahir (7/28/2013 9:09:00 AM) look for nirvana....elusive dream there

    nice lines fluid and easy to the tongue
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,012 Points Godfrey Morris (6/22/2013 11:20:00 AM)

    Such a brilliant write. I do share this dream. Please continue to write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,243 Points Sekharan Pookkat (6/21/2013 8:25:00 AM)

    Asking questions is the best way to improve our imagination-finding answers will lead to another questions and answers. Good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Survi Sharma (6/20/2013 12:53:00 PM)

    rhyming scheme of the poem is just mindblowing
    great write to start with
    wish you a bright future (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 19, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, April 28, 2014

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