A Place I Wish Poem by Sayli Satam

A Place I Wish

Rating: 4.4


Lying on the bed with imagination ruling my mind,
I wonder if there exist a place where happiness I can find.

A place far away from this selfish land where I can be me,
A place where there are no restrictions and I can fly free.

A place which lack emotions, feelings and pain,
A place where there is God to walk along with me on every lane.

A place where wonders and magic exist,
So that I can forget the things I want to, so that I can get out of this pain and suffering too.

A place where money doesn't rule,
A place where no one can be made fool.

A place where exist loyalty,
A place where love is free of durability

A place where only our loved ones exist, with whom I can spend infinite time,
Where I can spread happiness around and like a bright star I shine.

A place where I can meet God whenever I’m low,
And question him why the things happened so.

Why you sent such person in my life who are not meant to be,
Why have you sent me in this world where I can’t be me.

Millions of questions I need to ask to Lord for this suffering,
Where is the place you exist lying on the bed I keep wondering…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Survi Sharma 20 June 2013

rhyming scheme of the poem is just mindblowing great write to start with wish you a bright future

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2020

Why you sent such person in my life who are not meant to be, Why have you sent me in this world where I can’t be me. Millions of questions I need to ask to Lord for this suffering, Where is the place you exist lying on the bed I keep wondering… ASking the Lord so many questions. life and love and a real love life is mystery. we dont find answers to so much of our own thinking and experiences. tony

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V P Mahur 02 March 2014

Dear Sayli Your Imagery is real wonderful I love reading this poem Thanks for nice read keep it up I invite you to read my poems and put comments

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Saadat Tahir 28 July 2013

hah...you look for nirvana....elusive dream there nice lines fluid and easy to the tongue :)

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Godfrey Morris 22 June 2013

Such a brilliant write. I do share this dream. Please continue to write.

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Sekharan Pookkat 21 June 2013

Asking questions is the best way to improve our imagination-finding answers will lead to another questions and answers. Good work

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