A Journey To Eternity Poem by Uzma Jamil
A Journey To Eternity
Time is to take a jerky turn,
I blinkingly moved away,
The end is flawless,
Nostalgias awakened;
Poppies form a folly,
Right from the trooper,
An air of fragrance,
Moves all day along,
Six feet below is to lie thee,
Swiftness moves terribly in autumn,
Leafless trees,
Branchy structure with the bulky mass,
All day long enjoy the melody,
One right word…..
Rises all spirits high,
Journey to the heaven continues,
Bodies surrender,
Souls activate,
Moving towards eternity.
it is as if we are collectively going to some direction, , , i wonder if we have a word there and then we talk of loved ones left behind, , , i like it
One right word….. Rises all spirits high, Journey to the heaven continues, Bodies surrender, Souls activate, Moving towards eternity. Journey of souls.........a collective move towards eternal life. A simple poem with beautiful broken imagery and deep meanings. Best Wishes. Naseer
wow some great phrases here keep writing! ! ! :) Athena *** words will change the world ***
Good work Uzma! ! here you are sinking in deep thoughts sitting spart from the mob! ! 10.. for a nice poem Ali
Bodies surrender, soul active , wonderful truth steeped with high spirituality. Too nice a poem shared by you! ! Thanks, Best regards. Sudipta Bhattacharyya.
Woah imaginative awesome poem on souls leavin the body! Extraordinary job! Pls coment my latest poem.
Woah imaginative awesome poem on souls leavin the body! Extraordinary job! Pls coment my latest poem.
Woah imaginative awesome poem on souls leavin the body! Extraordinary job! Pls coment my latest poem.
A beautiful thoughtful poem. A journey continues on to heaven,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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The process of transition has been described; pathos combined with didactic philosophy, simple diction and powerful imagery; nice attempt. Go on Uzma and take care. Shanazar