Repulsive Blow Poem by Uzma Jamil

Repulsive Blow

Rating: 5.0


To the truth that remained unrevealed,
The terror that was unreceived,
And much was unsaid,
That moved steps ahead,
The wrestling of leaves whispered,
And laid the cocoon sentiments,
For it as a much creatures,
Plead was the silence,
For the wilderness knows no satisfaction,
The night departed and set was the moon,
Would ever ye sleep, for a habit so great,
A serious pathetic attempt,
An anguish repulsive blow,
Came off from merciless happiness,
Thoughts of future that rest,
A desperate still day,
And an emptiless doubtful principle,
An exact interrogation for the broken hearts,
That mend all way to fresh all-around.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 27 July 2012

a bit archaic and challenging... i cdnt get the focal point...but creative writing is like that, by nature...the poet says his mind and the commentator...goes any which way... you have a way with words...and its evident you have great potential cheers

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Muhammad Ali 12 May 2009

You are a deep and well thinker Uzma! ! it is hard for me to approach somewhere! ! 10..

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Iram Jamil 31 May 2008

hi shonu nice poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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