A Journey Through The Awkward Seas! Poem by Surayya Abbas

A Journey Through The Awkward Seas!

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Life is not secure
With tragedies
And miseries
All around
Yet, difficulties
Can be sought out
With internal wisdom
And beauty
So pure
So bright.

The missing links
Make the innards co-ordinate
With brain
And all customise
In right direction
To sail through the awkward seas
In coracle of reverie.




3/17/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 21 March 2009

Poetry at its best..a well penned piece. thanks for this

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Breeanna Mcelmurry 22 March 2009

you are so rite on that. good work

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Mohammed Albalushi 22 March 2009

i really enjoye reading it, will done

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Greenwolfe 1962 22 March 2009

This is so true. People have the resources within themselves to survive the worst things that can come our way. A very powerful message is contained in this piece. GW62

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Satheesan Rangorath 22 March 2009

A thoughtful poem with a fine message. You put your world intellegently. One can keep it for a reference. Greetings Satheesan rangorath

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Sandra Fowler 21 May 2009

Wonderful title. Your perception is 20/20.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Saadat Tahir 19 April 2009

very very nice...really saadat

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Bob Blackwell 18 April 2009

The only way we can live life, is live it as it comes deal with each moment when it arrives. I like the way you express yourself so simply like the coracle which is quite a simple boat. You are a compassionate lady.

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Amin Khan 10 April 2009

Your poem reflects: Deep study, High expressions, Poor situation and rich views. Simply nice. Amin.

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Faran Khalid 05 April 2009

Good Work.... I like it.

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