Give And Take Poem by Surayya Abbas

Nice flow of thoughts Surayya, well done. Best, Jerry

Brilliant piece of flowing thoughts, nice penning

the message is loud and clear..A nice write

Very well said, and beautifully Thanks for sharing Surayya Ji

The ability to give without expecting any reward is a lesson for all - 10

a good subject for PH poets..well done...10+++ But, if unconditionally One adopts The ability to give, Support and facilitate others Without expecting rewards Is bestowed with Inner contentment.

System are not what documents say.... They are habits of people, which they practice.... Have good habits and give good system to new generation....!

Message with guidance for a better life - wonderful. Unfortunately there will always be takers....thank G-D for the givers we have.Well written- Regards Cindy

what a great way to put a huge canvas through so few words..very very nice poem simple yet touching and... almost imposes self reflection

I don't know whether this is a good thing or a bad one but this poem kinda sounds essayish; D But I agree with your way of thinking though, giving is definitely something which should be enjoyed and not sulked over ;)