sunlight on my back
I, facing my own shadow,
five inches taller
a playful, childlike observation captured in few simple words... fascinating the child in this reader.: -) myself looking better on my shadow.
sunlight on my head I, facing my own shadow, hiding underneath my body............................Good Write.......10+++.......
Great haiku Candice...so much said in so few words but filled with images....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
interesting...and quite intriguing. Are we mere shadows of ourselves?