A Greater Wisdom Poem by shweta advani

ohh..this is a very soft poem. touching. thank you friend.

Yes one needs shepherd but shepherd must be heavenly not earthly.....................Good Write.........

this is a really great poem! .. the only thing i would say is the spelling of 'the'.. the 'd' kind of throws the poem off... but the poem itself is amazing.10++

such wonderful poems bring their own light............................ John

Stupidity is not that distant away from daredevilness...when we step out in 'dark', as you said and said well, we always 'need a hand to guard and guide'...good meaningful write, Shweta..10.

This is the earlier stage in the path of attaining wisdom.........all seekers of knowledge go through. But realizing that we need a Guru itself shows that the person has already reached the path...............What happens in the penultimate stage...........if u so wish........you may read my poem JEEVANMUKTHA. Very good poem........in fact more than a poem......wisdom

Clearly spells out the importance of a guide anywhere.

hi.....only a person with great wisdom can speak about such a greater wisdom so you already have that my friend......

It is wise to have help, ateacher to guide us through our difficulties. You write very well. 10+

High thinking at a young age! ! ! Congrats! Keep it up! 10+