Indira Renganathan


A Fevered Poem


So, whoever is ill, my dear friends
Don't let the fevered thoughts go away
Gather them to treat with proper words
To set them right in rhythm anyway
One, two, three...line by line as they stand
Refresh and fine-tune them to display
Beats from their hearts a harmonic band
No more febrile they..yet fevered they say
'A Fevered Poem' of their cordial chords

Submitted: Wednesday, February 03, 2010
Edited: Thursday, July 21, 2011

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  • Gold Star - 10,855 Points Soulful Heart (7/21/2011 12:10:00 AM)

    put it in a nut shell........expressive and so lyrical......... hi i am new one so plz read mine and comment (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (6/3/2010 8:00:00 AM)

    A delight to read, flavoured with mystery and thoughts flowing.Thanks for sharing, Indira. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (2/17/2010 4:43:00 PM)

    In the late Nineteenth Century an Italian poet, Giosuè Carducci, wrote a poem called 'In Front of Caracalla's Baths'. Rude politicians got to Rome, the glorious Eternal Town: they recalls barbudos and malaria (the fever) should keep them away. That neighbourhood was really marshy, however those villains are always there.This poem reflects the same sensibility. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,090 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/15/2010 6:10:00 PM)

    So, whoever is ill, my dear friends
    Don't let the fevered thoughts go away
    Gather them to treat with proper words
    To set them right in rhythm anyway..................ya add fragrance to it in passionate way and it will its own music to be heard with so muc love and car.. beautifully carafted poem with deep thoughts.....10

    read mine... diamonds are for ever... you an d me... i miss (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 200 Points Palas Kumar Ray (2/3/2010 9:15:00 AM)

    Fevered thoughts.....very different subject indeed.May be we need collect them with care to know the health of subconscious mind.may be that is the actual health of someone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pink Butterfly ... (2/3/2010 7:17:00 AM)

    This is really cool! ! ! Very enjoyable to read! ! ! I had fun reading it! ! ! Good job! God bless you! ! !

    -Pink Butterfly- (Report) Reply

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