Indira Renganathan

A Fevered Poem - Poem by Indira Renganathan

So, whoever is ill, my dear friends
Don't let the fevered thoughts go away
Gather them to treat with proper words
To set them right in rhythm anyway
One, two, three...line by line as they stand
Refresh and fine-tune them to display
Beats from their hearts a harmonic band
No more febrile they..yet fevered they say
'A Fevered Poem' of their cordial chords

Comments about A Fevered Poem by Indira Renganathan

  • Gold Star - 11,015 Points Soulful Heart (7/21/2011 12:10:00 AM)

    put it in a nut shell........expressive and so lyrical......... hi i am new one so plz read mine and comment (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Touhid Barkat (4/24/2011 1:13:00 PM)

    Great read, keep up the good work! Layers of meanings, so little yet so much... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yelena M. (6/3/2010 8:00:00 AM)

    A delight to read, flavoured with mystery and thoughts flowing.Thanks for sharing, Indira. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (2/17/2010 4:43:00 PM)

    In the late Nineteenth Century an Italian poet, Giosuè Carducci, wrote a poem called 'In Front of Caracalla's Baths'. Rude politicians got to Rome, the glorious Eternal Town: they recalls barbudos and malaria (the fever) should keep them away. That neighbourhood was really marshy, however those villains are always there.This poem reflects the same sensibility. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/15/2010 6:10:00 PM)

    So, whoever is ill, my dear friends
    Don't let the fevered thoughts go away
    Gather them to treat with proper words
    To set them right in rhythm anyway..................ya add fragrance to it in passionate way and it will its own music to be heard with so muc love and car.. beautifully carafted poem with deep thoughts.....10

    read mine... diamonds are for ever... you an d me... i miss (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (2/7/2010 12:38:00 AM)

    i do write a lot of them...don't recommend any body to read...some may be downright silly even...a different subject for a poem mam (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (2/6/2010 6:44:00 AM)

    treating fevered thoughts with words! Well, that's nice to read...good advice...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Palas Kumar Ray (2/3/2010 9:15:00 AM)

    Fevered thoughts.....very different subject indeed.May be we need collect them with care to know the health of subconscious mind.may be that is the actual health of someone. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 200 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (2/3/2010 8:42:00 AM)

    the compression is maturity of thoughts/nib (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pink Butterfly ... (2/3/2010 7:17:00 AM)

    This is really cool! ! ! Very enjoyable to read! ! ! I had fun reading it! ! ! Good job! God bless you! ! !

    -Pink Butterfly- (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 21, 2011

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