I am writing to let you know how I feel
I cannot describe my intense affection and emotion
Therefore, I am going to put my feelings in words.
Since the first day, I met you.
I have not been the same,
These abstract feelings I just cannot seem to tame.
I am starting to like you in a different way.
I dream of you every day!
I love everything about you!
Your sweet simple smile,
Your beautiful eyes,
Your tin & long shinny hair,
And you’re simple but lovely face...
If you only know, how I feel for you?
I can't get you out of my mind,
I can't get you out of my heart,
I can't get you out of my soul,
Every day my feelings just keep growing
What I am trying to tell you is this,
That I am falling in love with you –
Yes, it’s true!
I always understand if you don't feel the same.
I only want you to know how I really feel.
And this is no lie, I am for real.
Your honesty makes this piece just great. Nobody should ever hide their affection, especially when it feels right and good... I only disagree with you about one phrase - I don't think anybody's got a simple face... Our faces are the mirrors of our souls, and as we all know, our souls are often far too complicated...
Wow I abosoultly love that.......I wish i had such wonderful terrific poems like u! ! ur my idol! ! ! !
Rommel-that is beautiful! You have very deep passion and it really shows in this writing..thanks so much for sending me the message to read it..look forward to reading more, Meghan
I may be stepping late to read your words but they still the heart with true depth of feelings....
You need to keep writing poetry. Your talent deserves to be displayed and I look forward to reading more of your work.
awsome work, great feeling....I wish I could express the way you do...keep penning.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Go for it Rommel, better to express than to keep it inside. and its nice to have that feeling I guess, being in love and beloved. :)