A Dream Terrified Poem by Priyanka Bhowmick

A Dream Terrified

Rating: 5.0


A dream terrified,
have lost my sleep at night,
don't know the reason why,
it has captured my sight.
Dream about a little child,
who has lost his family,
he's all alone now,
crying bitterly.
His family in bloodshed,
lost life in a fight,
fight with a terrorist,
who destoyed them within a night.
The child can't speak,
but he calls me,
to provide him shelter,
helpless is he.
I try to run at his call,
but still cannot,
don't know what is stopping me,
I try to give it a thought.
While he cries,
blood falls from his eyes,
eyes that are innocent,
and my dream away it flies.
Flies away with the night,
and I wake up in a mood terrified,
thinking was this fact or not,
thinking of the family that died.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Cozy and nice write!

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Marieta Maglas 24 May 2009

It is a nice poem.It is written with a lot of sincerity 10++

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 25 May 2009

You are penning so well about all disturbing thoughts. If it fiction it is OK. But if fact, the situation requires to be given a serious thought.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 May 2009

A terrifying dream well narrated there...flowing poem, Priyanka...i liked...10

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Catrina Heart 05 June 2009

A terrifying dream and truth that wrenched your being and others who also have the same history..............10++++++++

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Brishti Mazumdar 04 June 2009

Your terrified dream may terrify your mood, But it makes your verse very well composed. ...Brishti Mazumdar

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Josephine De Leux 01 June 2009

The abrupt tone of it really brings the impacts out, with a steady flowing rhythm. A dream that would make one sit in thought, isn't it? I hope never to have that dream.

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Shekhar Joshi 01 June 2009

really terrifying dream.......my mind guesses its reality for some though my heart wants to disbelieve this fact...... terror expressed well... good one

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 31 May 2009

a touching poem..... beautifully expressed. thank you.

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