ramesh rai

Gold Star - 11,145 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

A Dip Within A Smile


I like a dip within your smile
a smile on your face always beautify you
like a flower, kissing each ray of sun
saying all bye to passing wind.

Thy effulgence shines like full moon
when my pondering soul asks me
to search for a starless night;
your smile is enough to enlighten my soul.

A full moon is quite enough
to dispel all obscurity of my life
instead of millions of stars
failure to make a moonlit night.

Submitted: Tuesday, April 01, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, April 02, 2014

Topic of this poem: love

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  • Gold Star - 20,562 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/17/2014 4:43:00 PM)

    Smile of a full moon is better than laughter of so many stars. Love of a true friend is better than attractions of so many disguised friends. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,738 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/21/2014 7:34:00 AM)

    Beautiful Dip within a smile. What more beautiful can be when one soul feel enlightenment on taking a dip within a smile. Very true said, smiles are like the morning rays of sun which brings freshness to one's life. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us. (Report) Reply

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