A Dip Within A Smile Poem by ramesh rai

A Dip Within A Smile



I like a dip within your smile
a smile on your face always beautify you
like a flower, kissing each ray of sun
saying all bye to passing wind.

Thy effulgence shines like full moon
when my pondering soul asks me
to search for a starless night;
your smile is enough to enlighten my soul.

A full moon is quite enough
to dispel all obscurity of my life
instead of millions of stars
failure to make a moonlit night.

Tuesday, April 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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Simply beautiful is this creative composition!

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Akhtar Jawad 17 October 2014

Smile of a full moon is better than laughter of so many stars. Love of a true friend is better than attractions of so many disguised friends.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 July 2014

Beautiful Dip within a smile. What more beautiful can be when one soul feel enlightenment on taking a dip within a smile. Very true said, smiles are like the morning rays of sun which brings freshness to one's life. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.

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