Ronell Warren Alman

Veteran Poet - 1,566 Points (August 26,1974 / New York City, NY)

A Dark Path - Poem by Ronell Warren Alman

A dark path
That is where you are headed
Keep messing with the wrong crowd
And you will be leaning toward a dead end
Pull your head out of the water
It is not too late to turn it all around
Concentrate on doing the right thing
So that you can make your loved ones proud

Comments about A Dark Path by Ronell Warren Alman

  • Veteran Poet - 1,399 Points Kate Lechoe (9/14/2015 4:04:00 AM)

    Wise advice there. Keep it up (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,521 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/6/2014 11:25:00 AM)

    Love it! A great write! ................ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 145 Points Nimal Dunuhinga (12/1/2009 3:22:00 PM)

    Wise and deep..........thank you so much for your brotherly advise and your great comment on 'Goods Train'.Good luck Comrade!
    sincere regards,
    nimal (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (8/21/2009 4:54:00 AM)

    indeed a lovely poem.......Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 288 Points Palas Kumar Ray (2/25/2009 7:04:00 AM)

    You have that commanding voice which can help someone to take a U-turn from the Dark Path.Hope they will find you soon.
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  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (12/2/2008 1:54:00 PM)

    Very wise this...thank you... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 21, 2011

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