A Croak In The Dark Poem by Yasmin Khan

A Croak In The Dark



Let us go you and I
When the darkness descends before the eye
Like a shroud that covers the sky
Ghosts walk along the frozen sooty streets
The blind move up and down
Let us go hand in hand
And drink darkness sip by sip.

Amorous talks float on smoky air
Not ear to ear but cellular to cellular
Lost in self-love narcissists move on
How it’s easy to go through all this
To make vows and no fear of keeping
Or breaking them!

Gulls’ calls tears the sheet of night
Join the screams coming out of a thatched roof
Brakes screech, stretchers hurried, a gull’s nest’s robbed
The dark night plays its part, nocturnal shrieks
Stab the hearts, faces smeared red in blood
And darkness engulfs us as we strut along the deserted streets
But our eyes that shine like diamonds
capturing a ray in the dark sheet
Let us not retreat, YOU and I

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(From Eliot's 'The love Song of J Alfred Prufrock')
Feelings when darkness spreads everywhere
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sallam Yassin 17 April 2013

Wholeness of two in love and let whole the other worlds fade great piece of love thanks

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M Asim Nehal 12 October 2015

YOU and I........Wonderfully written poem, enjoyed it thoroughly....10

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Heather Wilkins 05 August 2013

but our eyes that shine like diamonds capturing a ray in the dark sheet let us not retreat you and I

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 April 2013

Magnanimous write and touch with the pen.Flying colours of poetry.

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Valerie Dohren 18 April 2013

Excellent write Jasmeen, greatly inspired.

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Shahzia Batool 17 April 2013

it looks nice to have a reference to some known piece, ... it is a good & inviting poem, though Eliot's YOU & I are heavily interpreted, are yours too are meaning the same? can we interpret them as 2 selves of the same being?

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