A Cottage By The Sea Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

A Cottage By The Sea

Rating: 5.0


That little cottage by the sea,
Where roses grow so eagerly,
That little place I long to live,
That special place,
So much to give.
It's in my dreams,
If only for real,
To satisfy the hope I feel,
That maybe one day,
Those dreams come true,
That special place,
I long for you.
That dream of mine,
I can't let go,
Maybe one day?
Maybe so?

Jayne Louise Davies

A Cottage By The Sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Irfanulla Shariff 22 September 2022

Yes, your dreams are eternally valuable and can't let it go. Beautiful poem, charmingly crafted. In particular, I enjoyed reading the first four lines. Jayne, thank you for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 24 September 2022

I can relate to the feelings. I'd love to have a cottage by the sea. So much peace and serenity flow in these words. Ma

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Nosheen Irfan 24 September 2022

I love the repetition of 'may be'. It creates a catchy rhythm.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 September 2022

A special, dream place! Surely, if you wish it, it will be yours. Marvellous poem Jayne....10

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Jayne Louise Davies 31 January 2023

Thank you everyone for your lovely comments x

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Rob Lamberton 30 January 2023

Also, it would be an attractive place for current friends to come visit you!

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Rob Lamberton 30 January 2023

Having a little place close to the ocean is a dream worth holding onto and a place to reminisce of good times with special people.

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Jayne Louise Davies 31 January 2023

Thank you Rob x I appreciate your lovely comments x

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Ruta Mohapatra 24 September 2022

I hope your dream will come true one day...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 September 2022

This is my secret dream

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