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A Cloud Of Rain

A dark cloud of rain
drifted into my life
And for some time,
I felt good, happy...
I no longer felt lonely.

I thought life would go on happily
In one long, long stretch of time...
But when the cold, harsh
winds of change started blowing,
The cloud of rain
had to drift away...

Life is still going on
In one long, long stretch of time...
I am not lonely.
I can't say I am sad or unhappy.
But you have left a void
That would take me
a long, long time to fill.

Submitted: Tuesday, January 31, 2006
Edited: Tuesday, January 31, 2006


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  • Nic Jennings (2/18/2014 8:01:00 AM)

    This poem took my breath away, expressing so appositely my current state. So glad to have found it as it has helped to clarify my thoughts, thank you Jasbir.

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  • Leslie Philibert (2/15/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    Like this, but I think the imagery (wind, rain etc) is stereotyped.... so OK, but nothing much new.

  • Valsa George (10/21/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    In life, it is quite natural to experience a kind of vacancy at times! But such an void will soon be filled by something quite engaging! Be hopeful! A very realistic description of life!

  • marvin brato (2/15/2013 3:34:00 AM)

    Very profound sentiments about life became whne a loved one left!

  • Rajnimila Rajnee (2/15/2013 3:33:00 AM)

    life alone is not loneliness and unhappiness, but the feeling of void- simply understood. touched withing the self. Great piece!

  • Ken E Hall (1/7/2013 11:55:00 PM)

    Feelings gone with the wind I'm sure the void will be filled soon with your luvli poems...regards [ luvli is how Yorkshire people say it.]

  • Ramesh Rai (10/16/2012 3:54:00 AM)

    really a poignant write. deserving, magnificent. excellent......

  • Malini Kadir (5/2/2012 1:51:00 AM)

    Simply said.......perfectly understood
    Words express emotions felt
    regards
    MaliniKadir

  • Neela Nath (4/12/2012 7:25:00 AM)

    The pang of separation is deeply expressed through this poem.Great!

  • Aman Sa (3/31/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    Fervent, the rhythm makes me listen

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