Jasbir Chatterjee

Bronze Star - 2,346 Points (4 March 1966 / Delhi)

Comments about Jasbir Chatterjee

  • Gold Star - 29,312 Points Fabrizio Frosini (7/25/2015 3:29:00 AM)

    your poetry comes from heart and mind in a bright flow.. a real pleasure to read.. thanks for sharing

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  • Gold Star - 4,781 Points Soul Watcher (12/11/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    You are really a great poet.

  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/8/2014 6:56:00 AM)

    sounds really great. you are showing your emotions nice. you will have great future in poetry. i invite you to read my poems. as a friendly look.

  • Rookie - 10 Points Anubhav Gupta (5/4/2014 9:34:00 AM)

    Read your Poem When Intimacy turns into Indifference, loved it congratulations for being selected in members poems.
    Regards

  • Rookie Paul Ganz (5/1/2014 6:27:00 AM)

    Dear Jasbir, Your subjects are universal and connect with most of us. well done. May I suggest, however, that you refrain from your use of cliché, or well-used phrases that may not have achieved the status of 'cliché.' Find the original 'Jasbir-expression' that is memorable. I'm sure you read lots of poetry, but read more. You will never find the worn, tired expressions in good poetry.

    Also, use poetry can be used as inspiration to think better of others (and the world if not to get too lofty here) . Your comment about someone fiddling with the poll numbers is disappointing.

  • Rookie Michelle Oliveira (2/16/2014 2:38:00 PM)

    Hi, my name is Michelle and when I was a teenager I used to write poems. But as I got older I stopped doing it. Now, when I try to write something I have nothing. Anyways, I was reading your poem a cloud of rain. It hit home with me. So, I wanted to say thank you for sharing your poems and I can't wait to read more.

Best Poem of Jasbir Chatterjee

A Cloud Of Rain

A dark cloud of rain
drifted into my life
And for some time,
I felt good, happy...
I no longer felt lonely.

I thought life would go on happily
In one long, long stretch of time...
But when the cold, harsh
winds of change started blowing,
The cloud of rain
had to drift away...

Life is still going on
In one long, long stretch of time...
I am not lonely.
I can't say I am sad or unhappy.
But you have left a void
That would take me
a long, long time to fill.

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Silence

Speech is silver
And silence, they say, is gold.
But when bitter words remain
Unuttered
Till they are forgotten,
Duels and wars remain
Unfought
Till the reason is forgotten,
And peace remains
Untouched
Till the humans evolve,
Silence seems
To be more precious than even diamond.

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