Jasbir Chatterjee

Rookie - 776 Points (4 March 1966 / Delhi)

A Cloud Of Rain


A dark cloud of rain
drifted into my life
And for some time,
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  • Rookie - 84 Points Yash Shinde (4/25/2014 8:22:00 AM)

    A realistic view of life, .............at times we feel vacant, a sudden feeling of loneliness overtakes us............
    Not necessarily palpable, but it eats away from within......................
    A true n lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nic Jennings (2/18/2014 8:01:00 AM)

    This poem took my breath away, expressing so appositely my current state. So glad to have found it as it has helped to clarify my thoughts, thank you Jasbir. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 660 Points Leslie Philibert (2/15/2014 10:19:00 AM)

    Like this, but I think the imagery (wind, rain etc) is stereotyped.... so OK, but nothing much new. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,138 Points Valsa George (10/21/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    In life, it is quite natural to experience a kind of vacancy at times! But such an void will soon be filled by something quite engaging! Be hopeful! A very realistic description of life! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rajnimila Rajnee (2/15/2013 3:33:00 AM)

    life alone is not loneliness and unhappiness, but the feeling of void- simply understood. touched withing the self. Great piece! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,617 Points Ken E Hall (1/7/2013 11:55:00 PM)

    Feelings gone with the wind I'm sure the void will be filled soon with your luvli poems...regards [ luvli is how Yorkshire people say it.] (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (5/2/2012 1:51:00 AM)

    Simply said.......perfectly understood
    Words express emotions felt
    regards
    MaliniKadir (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sylvia Lukeman (2/15/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    I have just discovered this fine poem.You write well and the reader can feel some of you heart feelings No person one can know exactly how another feels but I can certainly identify deeply with your words
    You would be welcome to visit my poetry, (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gordon Tseng (11/15/2011 2:11:00 AM)

    Rainbow


    Although the clouds travel low
    And let the rain knock on windows,
    Still, we know the sun’s love will glow
    To change grey tears into colorful rainbow.


    by Gordon Tseng (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Sreejith Kulaparambil (5/14/2010 12:06:00 AM)

    beautiful... when u lose something which u like, u feel the pain and the vacuum it creates gets filled very slowly..

    good work.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (2/14/2010 11:47:00 PM)

    a poignant write on the inner void caused by the transitory cloud of hope! deep and heartfelt! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Subroto Chatterjee (5/26/2009 9:07:00 PM)

    Jasbir,
    You're a poet...you write your innner feelings like a lost soul which only a poet can express. Hope floats...
    Cheers.
    Subroto (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ashraful Musaddeq (5/23/2009 9:29:00 PM)

    'I am not lonely.
    I can't say I am sad or unhappy.
    But you have left a void
    That would take me
    a long, long time to fill.'

    A sad poem with positive view, love it with 10+ (Report) Reply

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