A Chance Rendezvous Poem by indira babbellapati

A Chance Rendezvous

Rating: 3.3


On a day when the sun's chariot
Is picking its momentum and
The night still exhaling cool
Dampness on the day's pricking skin
Sitting under an open sky I slip
Into an indescribable stupor
The melody of your thoughts
Transport me into...
'Inda! ' I hear a voice as if
I were sitting in a deep well
'Lift your head and take a look, '
My son's voice I hear from
Two floors down with his eyes skyward
I reluctantly raise my lashes
More to obey my young master
There my eyes catch a mild
Reddish shine on the easterly sky
With well defined angles:
Mars, the unrelenting war god
Stood majestic on a lonely field
Staring at nothing in particular
In dignity, valour and splendour

09feb2010
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sonya Florentino 23 February 2010

what a beautiful moment you've captured here......at the right place, at the right time....

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It was written with much intellectual finesse.

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Leonard Dabydeen 15 February 2010

Your 'rendezvous' is tantalizingly imaginative in its rich imagery. An ambiance of the night sky. Well written. Good read. Thanx for sharing. Blessings. Leonard

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 February 2010

it is so beautiful and interesting too... awesome!

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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