A Challenge (Is She Out Or In?) Poem by Manonton Dalan

A Challenge (Is She Out Or In?)

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i remember
when you’re running
towards me
like a football instant replay
every move up
to last milisecond
your lips touch my lips;
because i have to close
my eyes

to feel you
and me alone
in confines of bubbling ions
rising from my heel
and stop to my chest.
my mind confides in me
you’re awesome beast

Manonton Dalan
Saturday, September 27, 2008
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Ena N. Mori 16 May 2010

awesome beast, best words in good order. lol

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Gi Galen 02 October 2008

Without a deceit also it is figurative … nice...

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

lol! ! beautiful......read mine 'when we make love'

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