A Black In The Eye Poem by Adrian Cox

A Black In The Eye

Rating: 5.0


Hands swing around
a circle of numbers
till they reach out
both of them,
grab you by the lapels
then smack you in the eye.

You're late for work again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 29 June 2009

hard task master...there yanking up poem....mercy master ;) well written cheers

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Hands swing around a circle of numbers till they reach out both of them, grab you by the lapels then smack you in the eye. You're late for work again..... very well penned and intellegent thought over. i like it... read mine brown eyes, miss i miss you and home bound with inflamed mind

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Catrina Heart 06 July 2009

I took this as a humour poetry i suppose...its nice and well written poem...

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Ruth Walters 12 July 2009

Bosh! Got me! haha - great little poem this. Ruthy: -))))

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Marieta Maglas 05 August 2009

wonderful symbolist poem, lovely to read...10+++++ from me

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Martin O'Neill 06 April 2012

Funny and well observed. Been there a few times myself

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 December 2011

Neat piece.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 December 2011

Neat.

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Vipins Puthooran 28 September 2011

Great poem, remember me about a morning

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Ramesh Rai 02 September 2011

Dear Adrian, very nice poem and impressive. please comment on my poem. with best wishes ramesh rai

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Adrian Cox

Adrian Cox

Lincoln England
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