A Bird In Hand Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

A Bird In Hand

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And I liked egg—today in hand,
Than hen tomorrow in dreamland;
I thought: the egg could hatch
Tomorrow more to fetch,
Not if in dreamland—it'd depend.

But my egg failed to hatch—
Not from a fertile batch,
And I looked at my smiling friend,
Looked too at the hen in his hand,
And wondered at his catch,

Which, appeared to say,
Mind not what proverbs may,
One without dreams walks empty hands.
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Humour | 07.12.2017 |

Tuesday, February 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 23 June 2019

Of course humorous with those interesting ending lines

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 June 2019

Thank you Indiraji, you may like to read my piece on 'Humour' written in 2009 and recently dug out by Dr Swain.

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M Asim Nehal 24 February 2019

Ha ha ha Very well thought, indeed humorous with a serious punch line at the end.10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

Thank you Mohammad Nehal for your feedback.

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Hans Vr 22 February 2019

Very good. A smile and an aha moment. I loved it

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 February 2019

Thank you Hans Vr, and welcome to my poems.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 February 2019

A fun poem in limerick, Aniruddha....10++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 February 2019

Thank you so much, Bernard.

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