Edward Kofi Louis

Silver Star - 8,643 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

A Better Place


Let us love this world and put it in a better shape than hate,
Let us share true love with one another to make the world go round;
For our negative actions will surely lead us to fights and wars,
But true love from us all will make the world a better place.

Submitted: Sunday, August 10, 2008
Edited: Sunday, May 16, 2010

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,100 Points Walterrean Salley (9/17/2014 4:46:00 PM)

    A positive composition, and what we need most - right now. Oh that the world could hear this! . Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (12/23/2008 6:06:00 AM)

    love with respect s thebest element on how to live happily in ths earth of ours...love with honesty, love with sncerty and love without bad intentions are all we need to come up with a good relationship between different races...this is just only a poem but ths is treu that happens on human now..thanks for writng ths poem, hope others could see and open their minds to every lines written in ths poem..
    naizz (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Min Sia (12/15/2008 6:25:00 AM)

    Inspiring message of this great poem!

    Truly words were floating like clouds..and so lovely!

    Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem! (Report) Reply

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