♥ My Perfect Angel ^j^ Poem by Ashley Nichol

♥ My Perfect Angel ^j^

Rating: 2.7


Perfectly placed sunbeams makes his hair glow.
The sparkle of his eyes when he looks at me is enough to die for.
He has the perfect angle at the corner of his beautifully shaped lips.
He has a smile that could be mistaken for the sun - the one that could light up this whole town.
The beautiful curve of his biceps.
The smoothness of his hand in mine.
The sound of his voice makes me tingle all over.
There is a light that shines right out of him.
He couldnt be any more perfect! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 04 August 2009

when you are in love the whole world looks perfect...nice write

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Prashant Shaurya 04 August 2009

well u cudnt have described better... well it can make others fall in love too.. tek care bye dear

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Blessing Nanier 05 August 2009

u said it urself, u couldn't be more perfect

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Bernard Snyder 20 September 2015

Absolutely beautiful. It is such a great feeling when one finds such a person. Great poem!

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 29 August 2009

Very interesting narration of love in a beautiful way.

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Obinna Eruchie 20 August 2009

That truly is your perfect angel. Imaginatively penned.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 August 2009

It's obvious you speak the language of the heart-the head don't speak the language of the heart-just keep reading other's work, including the classics and for goodness sakes don't stop writing!

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Afzal Shauq 17 August 2009

The beautiful curve of his biceps. The smoothness of his hand in mine. The sound of his voice makes me tingle all over. There is a light that shines right out of him. He couldnt be any more perfect! ! its really a self sectred poem but make up is good, interesting, meaningful and making the readers think about you and they may consider you angel too.. keeping your tiny age, you are like angel true and respect you and your talent..appreciate it..10/10

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Ashley Nichol

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