A Silly Little Wish ☼ Poem by Ashley Nichol

A Silly Little Wish ☼

Rating: 2.8


i looked up.
i saw a shooting star.
i saw a shooting star in the sky.
i made a wish.
i made a wish to be with you!

i looked down.
i saw a penny.
i saw a penny on the ground.
i made a wish.
i made a wish to be with you!

i looked to my right.
i saw candles.
i saw candles on a pink cake.
i made a wish.
i made a wish to be with you!

i looked to the left.
i saw a dandelion.
i saw a dandelion on the lawn.
i made a wish.
i made a wish to be with you!

i looked straight ahead.
i see you.
i see you right in front of me.
i made a wish/
i made a wish and it came true! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prashant Shaurya 05 August 2009

i m left speechless... i mean hw can u love sumbody so much... one of the best poems i have read on poemhunter or elsewhere.... you touched my heart... thank u God bless

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Danny H 05 August 2009

This was so cute, and the technique of the poem is wonderful and creative :)

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Bele Lele 23 August 2009

This one made me smile, I really liked it, , i belive that wishes come true too.

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Ashley Stone 18 August 2009

If only everything wereso easy. A wish upon a star andeverything comes true. Great write.

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Saadat Tahir 06 August 2009

very nice...especially the sun symbol u have appende to the poem....feels like a laze in a meadow...waiting for some one... very well captured aura cheers

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Afzal Shauq 06 August 2009

i looked to my right. i saw candles. i saw candles on a pink cake. i made a wish. i made a wish to be with you! a master piece indeed.. how you made this poem is really amzing and imteresting... yes, he is every where..right, left, back and at front and even up and down..it indicates to the supreme God.. who is no where but every where..well done..liked it very much 10/10

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this was very creative and clever too, it was very cute and heart warming very great work Ash 10/10

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