28th Feb Poem by Farbe Bar
28th Feb
I know he had more days left in his life
But on 28th feb, I fought with my sis
And I went home alone from the hospital
To daddy, to seize the tears and get a kiss.
Dad told, I could have been kidnapped
I could have been sold to someone
Those days he said, that crime was picking its speed
And then picked board out, all of a sudden.
We played carrom together
I won the first set
No doubt, rest were his.
Now regarding punishment I had no threat.
Before completing the game
Mom and sis came back
Maybe dad got angry on them.
After dinner, we had melatonin attack.
Then we all slept and dad with those tensions
Next day he woke up, got paralysis in left brain
Mom woke me, he was lying on bed
Calling my name again and again
He first suffered paralysis
And then shortly after that, he quit
Maybe he saw a nightmare regarding me
And his body just couldn't tolerate it.
He first suffered paralysis And then shortly after that, he quit Maybe he saw a nightmare regarding me And his body just couldn't tolerate it. very emotive write liked keep writing
A sad intense read Farbe. You have a talent for great poetry...10
A sad and unfortunate story, Farbe. You told it with a factual style but I think you could have gone deeper into the feelings you had. Thanks for sharing and keep writing
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A sad and painful story of irreplaceable loss told with clarity of thought. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Farbe.
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Amen to what Kelly Kurt said. Always listen to Kelly. He's the expert on this site. Anything that happened was not your fault. Don't blame yourself.
A lovely poem expressing feelings that we all have experienced at a time of loss. Yet, I admit we do not all come to grips with our feelings as well. Well done. Read mine – Cicatrix – Adeline
A poignant write Fabre.. But I agree with Kelly.. You can do far better.. Thanks for sharing Farbe..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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It is a wonderful poem. I loved it. Thanks.