18 Before 13 Poem by jacobb st.andrew

18 Before 13

Rating: 4.8


People say that my dad was a good man, but the thing is if he was a good man then why did he leave a 11 year old to feed a family of 3 by himself.
The day I turned 12 I started working for my family because we had no dad.
I live for my mom, and sisters.

I would kill anyone who messed with them.
I have been growing up by the years.

I was 18 before I was 13.
so now I stand here, and I know who I am.

I am a uncle to hunter St. Andrew.
I am the bother to lots of people.

I am the true St. Andrew man.
I fight for my family, every time I wake up in the morning to see me, and my sis sleeping on the floor in the living room.1

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~~ ayani~~ 03 December 2009

souch a story thnx 4 sharing it! !

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Darius Jackson 30 April 2010

Wowza That was awesome thanks for sharing that! !

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Alex Fischer 23 April 2010

Simple yet deep. A very strong message that really portrays true feelings. Very good keep up the good work.

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Lady Simple 16 April 2010

this was so amazing i really understand where your coming fom

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Iron Panda 23™ 03 March 2010

woah! ! this is great! ! ....its soo touching....i likes it! !

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Tom Bates 07 December 2009

dude i like the 18 before 13 theme its gets people thinking.. keep up the good work!

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