156. Until Time Wears It Away Poem by Jaden Knight

156. Until Time Wears It Away

Rating: 5.0


Was it wrong of me
things went so bad too fast
I could not stay to watch the end
had to get away from it all

The memories we made
I've packed away
in the black leather suitcases
that they arrived in 7 years ago
now I need to try to clear them from my head

But I can still feel the desire
that I had for you
will someone else cure it? ?
and I still feel the caress of your left hand
please just stop it
so I can just rest and escape away
before I go crazy

I know that it's not that simple
most of you will never fade from here
so rather than forget you completely
I will raise a memorial in my mind
to how it once was
and let it stand for now in place
until time wears it away

Friday, September 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 05 October 2014

where was the right hand? oh, 'john'. you are getting into the habit of writing beautiful poems, which the females especially love. i would say that i love it also, but then people might talk. really though, are you sure you aren't some undiscovered-by-the-poetry-publishers great poet like............well, you know, ..........the great ones! ? keep them coming; the girls can't get enough of them! to MyPoemList.....even though i hate love poems. bri :)

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Alesia Leach 02 October 2014

Very nicely written and very sad. I hope you find peace. Thank you.

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Noreen Carden 28 September 2014

A very nostalgic poem beautifully written

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Ging Taping 27 September 2014

In the right time you will....love love love..

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