10 Years From Now Poem by Jennifer Cook

10 Years From Now

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10 years from now will you remember me,
Will you hate me,
Or date me,
Or be late to my funeral,
I waited to long,
I kept on pushing you away,
Can you see the world in my eyes,
There is sadness between us,
I need something to tell me that you’ll be happy once more or I should be happy once more,
I never did try or you never try to get to know me,
There is forces cures in each world we are in,
We are so alone but different yet the same person we are,
10 years from now,
Will you know the truth about how I feel about you before its too late,
I lurk in the darkness,
Losing my path,
You need to face what you become towards me,
I need to face what I have become towards you,
We are different and I know that,
But 10 years from now will you marry me or still hate me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sam Finley 06 April 2006

hmmmm interesting......right on its got you say you base your poem off your life so this must be whats going on very good keep it up [smiles]

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Thomas Lopez 14 December 2006

WOW.......i love that poem, it touch my heart.

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Rebeca Valenzuela 04 February 2007

I really loved your poem.

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Madly In Love 27 February 2007

i kinda noe how u feel, good writing ur a real insperation

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Behar Rexhepi 28 February 2007

astonished am i from ur poetry so just keep on goinf forward

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Mountain Man 11 February 2017

10 years from now I hope everything is fine. Health & happiness awaits us with good cheer....

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Kinyua Karanja 09 July 2015

I can see the persona in many young people especially here at college asking this rhetoric question in their mind. Nice poem.

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Barry A. Lanier 22 February 2009

In your writing I can see my wn daughter with her realtionship of off and on with a guy she really loves...and yes in 10 years they'll be married or apart always wondering what if? great write

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Don Mcwilliams 08 March 2008

Very interesting, Jen. I like the tone, the musing on what will be. Don

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John Clark 22 April 2007

Impressive, Jen. Good to see your perspective on the future.

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