Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Fallen Angel - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.

Comments about Fallen Angel by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Rookie - 228 Points Ashek Sarker (9/23/2015 12:10:00 PM)

    beautiful poem.thank u for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,986 Points Kanniappan Kanniappan (9/21/2015 2:06:00 AM)

    Dear jennifer,
    I like your poem Fallen Angel. I translated into my mother tongue Tamil classical poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 113 Points Daniel Erdner (9/16/2015 3:41:00 PM)

    I feel like I know what you mean Jennifer. We are already forgiven by the One that truly counts. Getting others to forgive or forgiving ourselves is the trick! I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Koos Muller (9/9/2015 2:50:00 PM)

    Hi i am doing your poem in drama and i wondered what inspired you to write this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 406 Points George Hill (9/9/2015 9:20:00 AM)

    No capacity here.I did read it through but regret it.This poem writer does not know the value of the hour or her writings would reflect communique' of urgency.One must write as these words be their last to make a poem tolerable.And what would come of this continuance? A fine artist.-Albert George Vinny (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,717 Points David Wood (9/8/2015 5:09:00 AM)

    A delightful poem and as Rajnish said below, to err is human. Good ink. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,321 Points Rajnish Manga (8/4/2015 2:44:00 AM)

    To err is human. So, harbor no fear of mistakes. Get up ye fallen angel and start afresh. Thank you Jannifer for this lovely poem. I will quote a couple of lines: I have fallen from sky, /....They took my wings, / They took me apart made me human, /....This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,667 Points Thomas Case (7/31/2015 6:49:00 PM)

    good poem. Very sad, but very hopeful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,216 Points Kinyua Karanja (7/9/2015 4:51:00 AM)

    This is indeed a great poem from a creative mind. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,382 Points Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe) (6/27/2015 8:16:00 PM)

    woow. Great (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,492 Points Roop Rekha Bhaskar (6/14/2015 1:57:00 AM)

    Beautiful! you truly are a strong Angel. He always gives us all a second chance. And the second chance always works. I believe that. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,426 Points Louis Borgo (6/9/2015 5:12:00 AM)

    Nice Title for a Excellent poem to start the day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points D Jones (6/7/2015 4:56:00 PM)

    I always love the image of a fallen angel. Usually I look at it as a way of losing innocence in one's life. I think this takes my thought on that and expands it.
    It seems like the character lost that innocence, and now has to fight back to be happy and okay again. This not only describes a fallen angel, but an angel that wants to get back up again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 129 Points Sonali Ganguly (5/4/2015 6:26:00 AM)

    it is really great that if life gives us second chance to learn from the mistakes...... very few people actually get this second change in life......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,737 Points Patricia Grantham (4/11/2015 8:27:00 PM)

    A very nice write on fallen angel. It has a lot of depth and
    understanding. We all would like to get a second chance
    at life. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,385 Points Rakhi Jayashankar (4/6/2015 9:43:00 PM)

    periferrally this poem seems simple but thus holds so much philosophical relevance (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,321 Points Rajnish Manga (3/15/2015 1:20:00 AM)

    This is an apt message to all those fallen souls who did not have a chance or courage to set them free and to rise once again. Serene and soulful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,379 Points Paul Sebastian (2/22/2015 8:14:00 AM)

    Great message of leaving behind the past buried and to begin a new life of a new angel. Life is to recreate after the fall and not to stay fallen. Thanks so much. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,019 Points Godfrey Morris (2/21/2015 8:47:00 PM)

    Simply awesome great write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,748 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (2/17/2015 5:15:00 PM)

    Hello Jennifer. I enjoyed your poem and wish you the best. Loyf (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006

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