Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Fallen Angel


I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.

Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006

Do you like this poem?
37 person liked.
9 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Fallen Angel by Jennifer Rondeau )

  • Gold Star - 12,005 Points Rajnish Manga (3/15/2015 1:20:00 AM)

    This is an apt message to all those fallen souls who did not have a chance or courage to set them free and to rise once again. Serene and soulful. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,771 Points Paul Sebastian (2/22/2015 8:14:00 AM)

    Great message of leaving behind the past buried and to begin a new life of a new angel. Life is to recreate after the fall and not to stay fallen. Thanks so much. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,511 Points Godfrey Morris (2/21/2015 8:47:00 PM)

    Simply awesome great write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,351 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (2/17/2015 5:15:00 PM)

    Hello Jennifer. I enjoyed your poem and wish you the best. Loyf (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,855 Points Kim Barney (1/11/2015 6:30:00 PM)

    Love the poem, but angels don't really have wings, you know. They look just like you and me. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,912 Points Abekah Emmanuel (10/26/2014 3:08:00 PM)

    Well written poem. I like your the simplicity of the message. But does that 'fallen angel' refers to the 'lucifer' mentioned in the Bible? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fallen Angel Purrs (5/25/2012 8:02:00 PM)

    Jennifer, you're brilliant! I love this poem! Brings out so many emotions for me. Even though she has fallen, she is still full of hope. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Emily Corvinus (3/13/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    i really understand you believe me and i do agree amazing really truely amazing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wildan F Rabbani (5/16/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    Second chance to live
    It's a worth chance

    powerful poem, lovely written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sabrina Helphrey (3/29/2009 10:23:00 AM)

    This is a very good poem. I love to think about angels but when i look up poems about them, they are all the same. This is one of the best i've read and hope that others agree. you are very talented at writting poems. keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ali Babikir (2/11/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    My comments will be corresponded to what she had written about the fallen angel.
    Jennifer Rondeau is an exccellent poem-writer.She is really have a big experience in writing poems.Her mind inspires her to write this poem in a mould of poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Natali Surjan (9/3/2008 11:50:00 AM)

    Hey your poem is one of the BEST ive read about angles
    and hope you keep writing about 'Fallen Angel's' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marley Morgan (6/11/2008 3:04:00 PM)

    'thats SWEET' love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mehreen Tahir (5/12/2008 2:29:00 PM)

    very nicely penned...i hope the fallen angel flies away someday! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Linda Dittus (5/9/2008 2:20:00 PM)

    Great Poem! ! Nicely penned piece (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joshua Burckhard (4/4/2008 7:12:00 AM)

    omg this is a nice poem i love it
    still i hope one day you could open your wings to fly (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Judy Weatherington (3/7/2008 6:46:00 AM)

    omg i love this
    it is so cute and sad at the same time: ( (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joyce Martin (3/2/2008 3:53:00 AM)

    i think that is a lovely poem we always reap what we sew (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Molly Dougherty (2/20/2008 2:32:00 AM)

    i really enjoyed ur poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie shel cope (2/16/2008 4:24:00 AM)

    did they take your wings? or did you forget how to fly? or why? (Report) Reply

Read all 39 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  2. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  3. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  4. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  5. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  6. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  7. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  8. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. If, Rudyard Kipling
  10. Caged Bird, Maya Angelou
[Hata Bildir]