Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Fallen Angel


I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.

Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006

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  • Silver Star - 8,232 Points Kim Barney (1/11/2015 6:30:00 PM)

    Love the poem, but angels don't really have wings, you know. They look just like you and me. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,724 Points Abekah Emmanuel (10/26/2014 3:08:00 PM)

    Well written poem. I like your the simplicity of the message. But does that 'fallen angel' refers to the 'lucifer' mentioned in the Bible? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fallen Angel Purrs (5/25/2012 8:02:00 PM)

    Jennifer, you're brilliant! I love this poem! Brings out so many emotions for me. Even though she has fallen, she is still full of hope. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sabrina Helphrey (3/29/2009 10:23:00 AM)

    This is a very good poem. I love to think about angels but when i look up poems about them, they are all the same. This is one of the best i've read and hope that others agree. you are very talented at writting poems. keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ali Babikir (2/11/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    My comments will be corresponded to what she had written about the fallen angel.
    Jennifer Rondeau is an exccellent poem-writer.She is really have a big experience in writing poems.Her mind inspires her to write this poem in a mould of poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Natali Surjan (9/3/2008 11:50:00 AM)

    Hey your poem is one of the BEST ive read about angles
    and hope you keep writing about 'Fallen Angel's' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ruth Campbell (1/30/2008 11:18:00 AM)

    That's interesting. Could you be more descriptive about the angel and what she did wrong to be cast down from the sky and what she has to do now? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dave Ring (11/27/2007 5:43:00 AM)

    I love angels and all they do for us. However, I am real thankful that I am not an angel. Jesus Christ never died for an angel, but Jesus Christ did die for you and me.

    Rom 3: 23
    23 For all have sinned, and come short of the glory of God;
    KJV

    Rom 6: 23
    23 For the wages of sin is death; but the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord.
    KJV

    Rom 5: 6-8
    6 For when we were yet without strength, in due time Christ died for the ungodly.
    7 For scarcely for a righteous man will one die: yet peradventure for a good man some would even dare to die.
    8 But God commendeth his love toward us, in that, while we were yet sinners, Christ died for us.
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    John 3: 6-7
    6 That which is born of the flesh is flesh; and that which is born of the Spirit is spirit.
    7 Marvel not that I said unto thee, Ye must be born again.
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    Rom 10: 9-13
    9 That if thou shalt confess with thy mouth the Lord Jesus, and shalt believe in thine heart that God hath raised him from the dead, thou shalt be saved.
    10 For with the heart man believeth unto righteousness; and with the mouth confession is made unto salvation.
    11 For the scripture saith, Whosoever believeth on him shall not be ashamed.
    12 For there is no difference between the Jew and the Greek: for the same Lord over all is rich unto all that call upon him.
    13 For whosoever shall call upon the name of the Lord shall be saved.
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    2 Peter 3: 9
    9 The Lord is not slack concerning his promise, as some men count slackness; but is longsuffering to us-ward, not willing that any should perish, but that all should come to repentance.
    KJV (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Talia Anziliero (9/2/2007 8:06:00 PM)

    Lovely wording. Tender and close to the heart. When I read this I view the angel and stolen wings as if I where there myself. magnificent poem. (Report) Reply

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