Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie - 98 Points (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Fallen Angel - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.


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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/29/2016 12:40:00 PM)

    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,

    Beautiful lines predicting your poetic talent to reach your apex..
    Thanks dear poetess for such a lovely poem.
    A perfect 10 for it.
    Subhas (Report) Reply

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  • Bill Cantrell Bill Cantrell (4/2/2016 6:32:00 AM)

    All along the rainbows edge,
    Angels are placing their wings to dry
    Having softened the face of the face of the killing storm,
    They leave you a clear blue sky. And may your sky be of the bluest blue for a wonderful poem as this. (Report) Reply

  • Woru Sulyman Woru Sulyman (3/30/2016 6:51:00 AM)

    and with this conviction, this angel is sure to rise again (Report) Reply

  • Electric Lady (3/14/2016 11:11:00 PM)

    You are certainly no fallen angel dear poet. This is such an inspiring poem to many, including myself. I am glad you are still writing, and may you continue to write such beautiful poetry. Hugs. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (3/6/2016 10:04:00 AM)

    But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
    This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven. The desire to lead a better life and the conviction that i will be forgiven.... mistakes, faults, right path, a shining future.... thank you very much for this poem.. tony Already Reported Reply

  • Sonali Ganguly Sonali Ganguly (2/11/2016 3:32:00 AM)

    this fallen angel would surely make others realize the value of second chance. (Report) Reply

  • Thabani Khumalo Thabani Khumalo (12/26/2015 5:43:00 AM)

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    I have fallen from sky,
    Fallen to the ground,
    I am the angel of sadness,
    Angel of lost hopes,
    Angel of lost dreams,
    I am the fallen angel,
    Fear me not,
    I am here for reason,
    That reason is to have a second chance in life,
    That life I was given for a reason,
    They took my wings,
    They took me apart made me human,
    I was the fallen angel,
    But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
    This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
    This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
    This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven. (Report) Reply

    Jennifer Rondeau Jennifer Rondeau (2/5/2016 11:55:00 PM)

    why you copy my poem? ? ? ?

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (12/24/2015 7:05:00 AM)

    Nicely written, enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • E.j. Langley E.j. Langley (12/12/2015 3:59:00 PM)

    Touching. I have felt this, only would not call myself angelic (lol) . I hope we hear more from you. It's been a while. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Manonton Dalan (12/6/2015 1:13:00 AM)

    fallen really knows to avert things...very smart people (Report) Reply

  • Sofia Kioroglou Sofia Kioroglou (11/30/2015 8:43:00 AM)

    Nice poem Jennifer! I enjoyed it very much! (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (11/28/2015 4:54:00 AM)

    A very nice poem.Like it. (Report) Reply

  • Ashek Sarker Ashek Sarker (9/23/2015 12:10:00 PM)

    beautiful poem.thank u for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kanniappan Kanniappan Kanniappan Kanniappan (9/21/2015 2:06:00 AM)

    Dear jennifer,
    I like your poem Fallen Angel. I translated into my mother tongue Tamil classical poems. (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Erdner Daniel Erdner (9/16/2015 3:41:00 PM)

    I feel like I know what you mean Jennifer. We are already forgiven by the One that truly counts. Getting others to forgive or forgiving ourselves is the trick! I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Koos Muller (9/9/2015 2:50:00 PM)

    Hi i am doing your poem in drama and i wondered what inspired you to write this poem (Report) Reply

  • George Hill (9/9/2015 9:20:00 AM)

    No capacity here.I did read it through but regret it.This poem writer does not know the value of the hour or her writings would reflect communique' of urgency.One must write as these words be their last to make a poem tolerable.And what would come of this continuance? A fine artist.-Albert George Vinny (Report) Reply

  • David Wood David Wood (9/8/2015 5:09:00 AM)

    A delightful poem and as Rajnish said below, to err is human. Good ink. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (8/4/2015 2:44:00 AM)

    To err is human. So, harbor no fear of mistakes. Get up ye fallen angel and start afresh. Thank you Jannifer for this lovely poem. I will quote a couple of lines: I have fallen from sky, /....They took my wings, / They took me apart made me human, /....This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, (Report) Reply

  • Thomas Case Thomas Case (7/31/2015 6:49:00 PM)

    good poem. Very sad, but very hopeful. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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