Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Fallen Angel - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

I have fallen from sky,
Fallen to the ground,
I am the angel of sadness,
Angel of lost hopes,
Angel of lost dreams,
I am the fallen angel,
Fear me not,
I am here for reason,
That reason is to have a second chance in life,
That life I was given for a reason,
They took my wings,
They took me apart made me human,
I was the fallen angel,
But that fallen angel had one chance in life that she was given,
This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before,
This angel will go down the right path that has been chosen for her,
This fallen angel know what she has to do to be forgiven.


Comments about Fallen Angel by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Gold Star - 19,512 Points Rajnish Manga (8/4/2015 2:44:00 AM)

    To err is human. So, harbor no fear of mistakes. Get up ye fallen angel and start afresh. Thank you Jannifer for this lovely poem. I will quote a couple of lines: I have fallen from sky, /....They took my wings, / They took me apart made me human, /....This angel won’t make the same mistakes she made before, (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,281 Points Thomas Case (7/31/2015 6:49:00 PM)

    good poem. Very sad, but very hopeful. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,900 Points Kinyua Karanja (7/9/2015 4:51:00 AM)

    This is indeed a great poem from a creative mind. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,359 Points Joseph Dela Sulh (losembe) (6/27/2015 8:16:00 PM)

    woow. Great (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,467 Points Roop Rekha Bhaskar (6/14/2015 1:57:00 AM)

    Beautiful! you truly are a strong Angel. He always gives us all a second chance. And the second chance always works. I believe that. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Louis Borgo (6/9/2015 5:12:00 AM)

    Nice Title for a Excellent poem to start the day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points D Jones (6/7/2015 4:56:00 PM)

    I always love the image of a fallen angel. Usually I look at it as a way of losing innocence in one's life. I think this takes my thought on that and expands it.
    It seems like the character lost that innocence, and now has to fight back to be happy and okay again. This not only describes a fallen angel, but an angel that wants to get back up again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 129 Points Sonali Ganguly (5/4/2015 6:26:00 AM)

    it is really great that if life gives us second chance to learn from the mistakes...... very few people actually get this second change in life......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,305 Points Patricia Grantham (4/11/2015 8:27:00 PM)

    A very nice write on fallen angel. It has a lot of depth and
    understanding. We all would like to get a second chance
    at life. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,385 Points Rakhi Jayashankar (4/6/2015 9:43:00 PM)

    periferrally this poem seems simple but thus holds so much philosophical relevance (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,512 Points Rajnish Manga (3/15/2015 1:20:00 AM)

    This is an apt message to all those fallen souls who did not have a chance or courage to set them free and to rise once again. Serene and soulful. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,998 Points Paul Sebastian (2/22/2015 8:14:00 AM)

    Great message of leaving behind the past buried and to begin a new life of a new angel. Life is to recreate after the fall and not to stay fallen. Thanks so much. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,566 Points Godfrey Morris (2/21/2015 8:47:00 PM)

    Simply awesome great write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,675 Points Loyd C. Taylor, Sr. (2/17/2015 5:15:00 PM)

    Hello Jennifer. I enjoyed your poem and wish you the best. Loyf (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,932 Points Kim Barney (1/11/2015 6:30:00 PM)

    Love the poem, but angels don't really have wings, you know. They look just like you and me. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,090 Points Abekah Emmanuel (10/26/2014 3:08:00 PM)

    Well written poem. I like your the simplicity of the message. But does that 'fallen angel' refers to the 'lucifer' mentioned in the Bible? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fallen Angel Purrs (5/25/2012 8:02:00 PM)

    Jennifer, you're brilliant! I love this poem! Brings out so many emotions for me. Even though she has fallen, she is still full of hope. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Emily Corvinus (3/13/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    i really understand you believe me and i do agree amazing really truely amazing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wildan F Rabbani (5/16/2009 11:27:00 PM)

    Second chance to live
    It's a worth chance

    powerful poem, lovely written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sabrina Helphrey (3/29/2009 10:23:00 AM)

    This is a very good poem. I love to think about angels but when i look up poems about them, they are all the same. This is one of the best i've read and hope that others agree. you are very talented at writting poems. keep up the good work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2006



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