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Ben Gieske
(8/6/2009 3:52:00 PM) |
I find 'tottering ballet dance' presents a very imaginative and lively picture.
I prefer the first 'dead widow's bamboo bell over the second one.
The tanka produces the effect that it describes. Nicely done.
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Sandra Fowler
(8/4/2009 4:14:00 AM) |
Shadows are eternally fascinating to
the poetic mind. But I was most moved
by the widow and her bamboo bell.
That poignant sound resonates.
Warmest regards,
Sandra
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