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(018) Love And Life - Poem by premji premji

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Dear,

When I could listen to
Your heart-beats on mine,
Call it love!

When we could listen to
Our heart-beats in unison,
Call it life!


Comments about (018) Love And Life by premji premji

  • (12/30/2009 8:10:00 AM)


    love makes life worth it.read it again, a very intense, though simple poem.


    Mamta
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  • (12/28/2009 4:03:00 PM)


    Simple and beautiful, it strikes to the core...Two as one in life, great message. Thanks, premji, and best wishes to you.
    (amar)
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  • (10/28/2009 1:39:00 PM)


    'Dear, When I could listen to
    Your heart-beats on mine'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (8/6/2009 2:18:00 AM)


    Sir this is a fine poem! (Report) Reply

  • Malini Kadir (7/15/2009 11:45:00 AM)


    real great job so aptly and concisely put! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2009 1:29:00 AM)


    Dear
    U r great! :)
    regards
    Sandhya
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  • (5/13/2009 11:18:00 AM)


    Two minds
    Two hearts
    Two souls
    Two people so apart
    Made one
    By God and we call Him
    - Love!
    Prem, the Basic and Essential definition of love and live wonderfully rendered in verse. Yes, we live b'cos someone else's heart beats for us and our heart beats in love for them! So true, but, unfortunately, lucky few!
    Angel
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  • (10/4/2008 1:01:00 AM)


    just 4 lines of brief encounter
    with love--says it all
    nice poem premji
    ++++10 regards anjalie
    (notice the e)
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    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/18/2016 2:19:00 PM)

    I agree...................................

  • (7/29/2008 12:07:00 PM)


    amazing insight into love and life, short, succinct and sweet, with a deep message

    mamta
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  • Vidyadhar Durgekar (7/18/2008 12:13:00 PM)


    Very short and apt definition of love (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/27/2008 5:09:00 AM)


    amazing taste and feel. great. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 17, 2009


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