(024) Life Poem by premji premji

(024) Life

Rating: 2.7


I am the spear
You are the wound
I am the wound
You are the spear
Ha...Ha..Haaa...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a torture really........

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rago rago 15 May 2009

a dilemma as is................

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Martine Kolber 15 May 2009

Excellent! Reminds me somehow of something... Take care, Martine

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Kesav Easwaran 15 May 2009

Where there is a wound there is a spear...where there is a spear there is a wound...'words' have their own power, Premji, , , spear like sharp...10

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Sandra Martyres 15 May 2009

Life is like that.....nice piece..10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

Ha...Ha...Haaa.....is exclamation! ! ! NB UK

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 September 2009

Wow! Sir! Learning galore. Much said in quadruplet. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Luningning Minguez 26 June 2009

Yah that is life!

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Sandhya S N 25 May 2009

Ha ha haaaa It is doubting What did U? laugh since U could spear? Or cried due to wound? what ever it may be I simply laughed after reading regards Sandhya

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Fiona Davidson 20 May 2009

We all are evrything like this write...10++++

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