(006) Poetry Poem by premji premji

(006) Poetry

Rating: 2.9


Scratched on air,
Scribbled on water....
Trap me in
The prison of words...
And call me ''Poem''.....
I am that.......
Poetry.....

Spirit of the forest,
The wind and water,
Will I not be entrapped
When setting
A trap for you?

Message and reply, between two poets...
Premji and Angelina.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 12 June 2009

The spirit of poetry says, 'try, try agin, till you can grasp the whole truth, ' Really have no idea, what she means! Regards

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Catrina Heart 12 June 2009

Lovely piece about a poem of two..........

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Sandra Fowler 12 June 2009

Trapped in the prison of words, perhaps...but nothing can prevent us from singing behind those bars! Excellent write. Ten, of course. Always your friend, Sandra

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Sandra Martyres 12 June 2009

Lovely piece Premji....I agree with Sandra, being trapped in a prison of words is not a deterrent......10++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 June 2009

Lovely and interesting 10+++

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Sana Rose 27 July 2009

Really...a beautiful tricky write.....smiles n cheers 4 u! ! !

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 26 June 2009

Marvelous write. Premji........................

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very interesting poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mamta Agarwal 22 June 2009

very beautifulmost of the time I feel words intrude in moments of ecstasy. one just wants to be... Mamta

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Deepti Agarwal 21 June 2009

a sweet wonderful trap...... :)

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