I Love My Family So Much. Poem by Mahfooz Ali
I Love My Family So Much.
To be a part of a family like mine
is so divine
where love is shown
hurt is shared
our love for each other is never impaired
we talk
we laugh
we cry
but we are a family
and we do it all together
for as a family
we do it all as one
you hurt one
you hurt all
and as a family unit
we will all stand tall
for we are family
a family full of strength
a family full of love
a family no one can touch
that's why I love my family so much.
your lucky! ! I love my family to its just my cusin i dislike him alot but the rest are cool with me! lol thats great that u and ur family get along so great! Keep up the great poems! ~Hali C.
The essence of family as a social institution, well depicted in the poem. A home which has love as its foundation is heaven felt on Earth. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
A beautiful poem. Would be even better with two small changes. In line one, you didn't mean APART (one word): you really meant A PART (two words) . And in the last line, you should use THAT'S instead of THAT, S Keep on writing!
Great family love. Beautiful. Give you a 10. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments
Lovely poem love it superb.....thanks for this poem it means a lot to me
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11/20/2024 7:01:52 PM # 1.0.0
It is a simple poem yet means a lot. if u're having a problem, its good to know that u still have ur family behind u.