Pushing Me Away Poem by karen morales

Pushing Me Away



I look at you,
You look away,
I smile at you
You just stare,
I try to talk to you,
You walk away,
Only if you just know,
You're pushing me away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 27 August 2008

...a lucid but fine expression.....thanks

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Ershad Mazumder 23 July 2008

Very sweet piece. Keep on writing.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 July 2008

Succint, yet conveying the right expresssion to its fullest extent. sathya narayana

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Kayode Peter Ogunleye 23 July 2008

quit cool. keep writing.

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Catrina Heart 20 July 2008

Nice write Karen! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! keep on writing........

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