FREE
As it is I sleep
In a nightmare within a nightmare
I dream deep
In a slumber unawakened
Set me free
The chains remain unseen
Set me free
I feel myself dying
Light up the world
Break the chains
Let me out
I will not be tamed
Your what I need
Your what I have
I remain unseen
Break away
Let me go
Ill die of starvation
Or of sufication
The chains are tight
The time is right
Im not alone
Save me
Let me go
Im made to fly
im going to die
I wont lie
I need you
I need you
I need you
Hell is my destination
I live for your glorification
Set me free o father
Let me come to you
Let me run to you
Break the chains and
I
Am
Free
Now I go to thee
Children to set them
Free
By cody r. byrne
So expressive and very good imagery used...Great with two liner verses in each stanza. poetically refined.10+++
i liked your poem and i like what it expressed... it left me with so many unanswered questions idk if it was supposed to do that but it was good
It's cool how you used a small amout of words to express a big topic such as freedom. Also in your poems one line always seems to stand out to me. I like the line '...I was meant to fly...' and later how you commented your chained. Reminds me of the world. Everyone has a gift and is meant to succeed, its just up to us first before doing that to free ourselves from its chains.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Yes Cody! Your language simple, yet carries great meaning and aptly expressed...very good style and structuring of the poem...